It's very rare for somebody to be directly accepted into a Moderator position, so it is suggested that you apply for Mediator first. Now, your application is nice, but it appears that you've left out some important stuff that is almost required for the relevant experience section. What experience do you have in leadership, and enforcing rules (go into detail on this, please)? Also, can you correct the grammar on this a bit? If you do that, you'll increase your chances quite a bit.