I'm sorry to have to ever say that an application is unacceptable, but I must say it here. An acceptable application must be one that takes time and lots of thought, and not just one that takes a few minutes to type up. If you could give the post information about leadership experience and qualities that you feel you have instead of just plain Minecraft experience, you have a greater chance. If you look at the other applications that were accepted, it becomes obvious why they were accepted. The person put time and effort into them.
If you feel that you are willing to put the time and effort into it, I suggest you take a look at other applications and edit this one to look like a great, worthy application. 😉