Starting Top Game Reviews

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

Me and my friend are starting a review blog on top new-ish games on destructoid.com, Check us out

http://www.destructoid.com/blogs/Iownjui

 

[Laithes]

Fix up the grammar bro, no one's going to take you seriously if you don't. Your reviews are solid however, not a bunch of "lolololo faggots go play cod cuz it r teh best lolololo" that a lot of people spew out. Just improve on the grammar, and maybe include pictures of certain action scenes from the games, like if you talk about how dead space has zero-gravity sections, show Isaac doing a zero-g jump.

 

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

Sorry bro my friend alex is doing some of them he did the Warcraft and dead space one we have a joint account and thank you.

 

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

Fix up the grammar bro, no one's going to take you seriously if you don't. Your reviews are solid however, not a bunch of "lolololo faggots go play cod cuz it r teh best lolololo" that a lot of people spew out. Just improve on the grammar, and maybe include pictures of certain action scenes from the games, like if you talk about how dead space has zero-gravity sections, show Isaac doing a zero-g jump.

Sorry my friend alex was doin the dead space review and i will check over it now, Please comment and follow. Thanks for the Advice!

 

[The Noodle]

Sorry my friend Alex was doing the Dead Space review and I will check over it now. Please comment and follow. Thanks for the advice.



Ignoring punctuation and sentence structure for the moment. Remember your capitalisation!



Alex and Dead Space both need capitals because they're names. When using the word 'i' it also needs a capital.



Advice on the other hand does not need a capital within the given context.

 

[Laithes]

Ignoring punctuation and sentence structure for the moment. Remember your capitalisation!

Remember your capitalisation!

capitalisation

Problem?

 

[Tutrie]

I just unliked Noodles status to like Laithes status.

 

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

i hate you guys

 

[Cub_Nake]

Just run everything you do through a spell checker on a word processor. We're not trying to make you feel bad or attack your intelligence, just make you appear more reliable.

 

[Admin]

i hate you guys

y de hate? my englis is liek perfect

I just unliked Noodles status to like Laithes status.

i hop u reliz u can liek mor dan 1 at once.

 

[The Noodle]

Problem Laithes?

 

[Tutrie]

I would think it takes more time to spell incorrectly than it does correctly.

 

[Legojack261]

Don't think they're being too mean to you. They're actually helping you, if you can believe that. Laithes explained pretty well how your reviews are non-biased. With the extra spelling/grammar fixes, it just gives your posts a sense of "professionalism". No offense was intended.

 

[officerthegeek]

Yes it was.



All possible offence was intended.

 

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

Yes it was.



All possible offence was intended.

hbu stfu?

 

[Admin]

hbu stfu?

U mad?

 

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

U mad?

no are you?

 

[Mr_Mushrooms]

There seems to be some friction here...

 

[BROSxXxDANIEL]

noob^

 

[officerthegeek]

A

noob^

you are, D9.